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Sep. 17th, 2008 08:01 pmFrustrating: intriguing summary, bad sentence structure.
It doesn't matter if it's a good story if I have to stop every three sentences to parse what the author thinks she's saying. *grumpy* Get a beta, for heaven's sake.
It doesn't matter if it's a good story if I have to stop every three sentences to parse what the author thinks she's saying. *grumpy* Get a beta, for heaven's sake.