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Feb. 2nd, 2005 11:09 pmThat is the second review I've got stating that "Dinner Companion" has a female narrator.
Did it strike anyone else that way? I mean, really, be brutally honest about this...I know it needs work, I wrote it years ago, but the femaleness is not something that I'm sure I can fix. So PLEASE tell me.
Did it strike anyone else that way? I mean, really, be brutally honest about this...I know it needs work, I wrote it years ago, but the femaleness is not something that I'm sure I can fix. So PLEASE tell me.